Draft Posts Review Summary

This document contains spelling corrections, grammar improvements, content suggestions, and stable diffusion parameters for header images for all draft posts.

Table of Contents

1. 2021-01-04-what-is-an-engineering-coach.md
2. 2021-01-12-what-is-a-smart-camera.md
3. 2025-05-12-writing-your-next-chapter.md
4. 2025-05-19-the-price-of-silence.md
5. 2025-05-26-cultural-conways-law.md
6. 2025-06-02-raising-not-lowering-the-bar.md
7. 2025-06-09-respect-litmus-test.md
8. 2025-06-16-people-and-project-management.md
9. 2025-06-23-mothers-birth-year.md
10. 2025-06-30-finding-speaking-opportunities.md
11. 2025-07-07-help-framework-black-allies.md
12. 2025-07-14-lightweight-budgeting.md
13. 2025-07-21-leadership-listening-types.md
14. 2025-07-28-black-looks-like-tech.md
15. 2025-08-04-async-leadership.md
16. 2025-08-11-engineering-marriage.md
17. 2025-08-18-conference-speaker-journey.md
18. 2025-08-25-tech-career-inflection.md
19. 2025-09-01-tech-side-hustle.md
20. 2025-09-08-mentoring-patterns.md
21. 2025-09-15-leadership-debt.md
22. code-newbie-challenge.md
23. lightweight-budgeting.md
24. overcoming-my-fear-of-stuttering.md
25. public-speaking-retrospective-2019.md
26. smart-home-series-intro.md
27. test-draft-post.md

1. Engineering Coach {#1-engineering-coach}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 19: “and Engineering Coach” → “an Engineering Coach”
• Line 21: “number of questions” (informal) → “many questions” or “numerous questions”

Content Improvements

1. Incomplete Content: The post has placeholder sections (“TBD”) that need completion
2. Inconsistent Structure: Mix of Q&A format and narrative style
3. Redundancy: Lines 19-21 repeat information already stated in the excerpt
4. Missing Content: “What Makes a Good Engineering Coach Candidate?” section is empty

Suggestions

• Complete all TBD sections with substantive content
• Choose either Q&A format or narrative format consistently
• Add concrete examples of Engineering Coach responsibilities
• Include success metrics for the role
• Add comparison table: Engineering Coach vs Engineering Manager

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Professional engineering coach mentoring a software development team, modern office setting, diverse team members collaborating around a digital whiteboard, natural lighting, professional atmosphere, photorealistic, high detail"

Negative Prompt: "cartoon, anime, blurry, distorted, low quality, watermark, text, signature"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

2. Smart Camera {#2-smart-camera}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No major spelling or grammar errors found

Content Improvements

1. Incomplete Content: “Where Do I Put a Smart Camera?” section is marked TBD
2. Limited Use Cases: Only two use cases provided
3. Missing Technical Details: No discussion of resolution, cloud vs local storage, privacy concerns
4. No Product Recommendations: Missing specific camera recommendations

Suggestions

• Complete the placement section with room-by-room recommendations
• Add more use cases (package theft, pet monitoring, elderly care)
• Include technical specifications to consider
• Add privacy and security best practices
• Include comparison of popular smart camera brands
• Discuss subscription costs vs one-time purchases

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Modern smart security camera mounted on house exterior, sleek white design, monitoring front entrance, suburban home setting, high-tech surveillance equipment, realistic lighting, detailed architecture"

Negative Prompt: "cartoon, illustration, blurry, low quality, people, faces, distorted, watermark"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.75 strength)

3. Writing Next Chapter {#3-writing-next-chapter}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Excellent writing quality throughout

Content Improvements

1. Strong Foundation: Well-structured with clear tech metaphors
2. Good Flow: Transitions between sections are smooth
3. Actionable Content: Provides concrete takeaways

Suggestions

• Add specific examples of “pull requests to life’s repository” that were rejected/accepted
• Include a personal anecdote about a challenging chapter
• Consider adding a “debugging life” section with specific tools/practices
• Add more concrete “action items” at the end
• Include resources for readers wanting to dive deeper

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Open blank journal with fountain pen on wooden desk, soft morning light streaming through window, coffee cup nearby, inspirational writing setup, warm tones, photorealistic detail, peaceful atmosphere"

Negative Prompt: "text on pages, writing visible, cartoon, anime, cluttered, dark, messy, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 32
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

4. Price of Silence {#4-price-of-silence}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Excellent writing quality and structure

Content Improvements

1. Powerful Allegory: The maritime story is compelling and well-executed
2. Clear Parallels: Tech industry connections are well-drawn
3. Thought-Provoking: Raises important ethical questions

Suggestions

• Add specific real-world tech industry examples (anonymized if needed)
• Include decision-making framework or checklist
• Add resources for readers facing these dilemmas
• Consider adding a “what would you do” interactive element
• Include stories of people who chose differently and outcomes

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Dramatic stormy ocean scene with multiple sailing ships in rough seas, dark storm clouds, turbulent waves, cinematic lighting, powerful atmosphere, photorealistic maritime disaster, wide angle view"

Negative Prompt: "people visible, faces, calm water, sunny, cartoon, illustration, low quality, modern ships"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 8.0
- Steps: 35
- Sampler: DPM++ SDE Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.9 strength)

5. Cultural Conways Law {#5-cultural-conways-law}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 105: “Don’t believe me? Here’s the research” - This is a “Let Me Google That For You” link which may come across as condescending. Consider linking to actual research studies.

Content Improvements

1. Strong Concept: The hockey analogy is excellent
2. Well-Structured: Clear progression from observation to solution
3. Actionable: Provides concrete steps

Suggestions

• Replace the “bfy.tw” link with actual research citations (McKinsey, HBR studies on diversity)
• Add more data points and statistics throughout
• Include case studies of companies that successfully addressed these issues
• Add a self-assessment quiz for readers to identify their own advantages
• Include testimonials or quotes from people affected by the demographic lottery

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Youth hockey players on ice rink, diverse group of young athletes practicing, indoor arena lighting, action shot with movement, energetic atmosphere, professional sports photography, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "professional players, adults only, text, logos, blurry, low quality, cartoon, distorted faces"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

6. Raising Not Lowering Bar {#6-raising-not-lowering-bar}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Code examples are properly formatted

Content Improvements

1. Excellent Metaphor: The dating bar analogy is relatable and effective
2. Code Examples: Python code adds clarity and reinforces tech context
3. Actionable Steps: Clear guidance for improvement

Suggestions

• Add metrics/KPIs for measuring bar effectiveness
• Include before/after case studies
• Add interview question examples that test for diverse excellence
• Include common objections and responses
• Add a “bar audit” checklist for organizations

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "High jump athlete clearing bar in competition, motion freeze frame, athletic excellence, stadium setting, dramatic lighting, determination and skill, professional sports photography, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "multiple people, crowd visible, text, logos, blurry, cartoon, low quality, distorted"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 32
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

7. Respect Litmus Test {#7-respect-litmus-test}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 19: “treat 1:1 meetings” - Consider “treat one-on-one meetings” for clarity
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Compelling Hook: The $500 question is attention-grabbing
2. Clear Framework: Well-organized signs and actions
3. Practical Advice: Actionable recommendations

Suggestions

• Add more specific examples of what “investment-worthy meetings” look like
• Include sample 1:1 agenda templates
• Add troubleshooting guide for common 1:1 failures
• Include metrics for tracking 1:1 effectiveness
• Add section on remote/hybrid 1:1 considerations

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Modern empty meeting room with conference table and chairs, large windows with city view, natural lighting, professional corporate office interior, clean and organized, photorealistic architectural photography"

Negative Prompt: "people, messy, cluttered, dark, text, logos, cartoon, low quality, distorted perspective"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

8. People Project Management {#8-people-project-management}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Code examples well-formatted

Content Improvements

1. Research-Based: References to UC Irvine research adds credibility
2. Practical Examples: Code examples reinforce concepts
3. Comprehensive: Covers multiple aspects of human factors

Suggestions

• Add more citations for the research mentioned
• Include template for “human-centered project plan”
• Add case study of a project that failed due to ignoring human factors
• Include assessment tool for measuring team psychological factors
• Add section on neurodiversity and project management

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Diverse project team collaborating around table with laptops and documents, engaged discussion, modern office setting, natural teamwork, professional environment, warm lighting, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "posed, staged, stock photo look, text visible, logos, cartoon, low quality, blurry faces"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

9. Mothers Birth Year {#9-mothers-birth-year}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Powerful and well-written

Content Improvements

1. Personal Connection: Makes historical context relatable
2. Clear Timeline: Effectively bridges past to present
3. Thought-Provoking: Encourages reflection on progress and remaining work

Suggestions

• Add specific legal milestones and dates (Civil Rights Act, Fair Housing Act, etc.)
• Include statistics on wealth gap persistence
• Add comparison of opportunities then vs now with specific data
• Include discussion questions for team conversations
• Add resources for further learning about this history

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Vintage library interior from 1947, wooden bookshelves filled with old books, classic reading room, period-accurate furniture, warm amber lighting, historical authenticity, photorealistic detail, no people"

Negative Prompt: "modern elements, people, text on books, signs, cartoon, low quality, anachronistic details"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 8.0
- Steps: 35
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.9 strength)

10. Finding Speaking Opportunities {#10-finding-speaking-opportunities}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 26: “http://theweeklycfp.com” - Verify this URL is still active
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Practical Resource List: Concrete tools and platforms listed
2. Systematic Approach: Well-organized discovery strategy
3. Action-Oriented: Clear steps to follow

Suggestions

• Verify all URLs are current and active
• Add section on responding to rejections
• Include tips for international conference considerations
• Add budget considerations for self-funded speaking
• Include timeline/calendar for typical CFP cycles
• Add templates for CFP submissions

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Empty conference stage with podium and large screens, professional tech conference setup, dramatic stage lighting, auditorium seating visible, modern event venue, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "people, audience visible, text on screens, logos, cartoon, low quality, cluttered"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

11. HELP Framework {#11-help-framework}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Lines 35-38: “[First Essential Talk Title]” etc. - Placeholders need actual TED talk recommendations
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Clear Framework: H.E.L.P. acronym is memorable
2. Actionable Steps: Each section provides concrete actions
3. Balanced Approach: Combines learning with action

Suggestions

• Fill in the specific TED talk recommendations with actual titles and links
• Add specific book recommendations for each section
• Include success stories of effective allyship
• Add common mistakes section with real examples
• Include progress tracking worksheet
• Add resources for continued learning

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Two hands reaching toward each other to help, diverse skin tones, human connection, warm lighting, supportive gesture, photorealistic detail, close-up photography, meaningful interaction"

Negative Prompt: "whole bodies visible, faces, backgrounds, text, cartoon, low quality, staged"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

12. Lightweight Budgeting (New) {#12-lightweight-budgeting-new}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 199: “I am not a financial advisor” - Good disclaimer
• No spelling or grammar errors found

Content Improvements

1. Clear Framework: Well-explained budgeting system
2. Practical Examples: Code examples illustrate concepts
3. Actionable: Step-by-step implementation guide

Suggestions

• Add visual diagrams of account flow
• Include spreadsheet templates or calculation tools
• Add troubleshooting section for common issues
• Include tips for couples managing joint finances
• Add section on adjusting for income changes
• Include success metrics and milestones

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Simple budget planning setup on clean desk, calculator, notebook with neat columns, organized financial documents, natural lighting, minimal aesthetic, photorealistic detail, organized workspace"

Negative Prompt: "messy, cluttered, text visible on documents, people, hands, cartoon, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

13. Leadership Listening {#13-leadership-listening}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Code examples well-formatted

Content Improvements

1. Comprehensive Framework: Five types well-defined
2. Technical Analogies: Programming language metaphors work well
3. Practical Implementation: Clear guidance for each type

Suggestions

• Add audio/video examples of each listening type
• Include practice exercises for developing each type
• Add assessment tool to identify current listening style
• Include common mismatches and how to correct them
• Add section on listening in virtual/remote settings
• Include listening anti-patterns with corrections

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Professional person actively listening with focused expression, business casual attire, office environment, engaged posture, natural lighting, authentic moment, photorealistic portrait photography"

Negative Prompt: "multiple people, phone, distractions, staged, stock photo, cartoon, low quality, text"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

14. Black in Tech {#14-black-in-tech}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Powerful and well-structured content

Content Improvements

1. Systemic Perspective: Goes beyond surface-level diversity discussion
2. Practical Solutions: Actionable recommendations for all stakeholders
3. Balanced: Addresses structural and cultural issues

Suggestions

• Add specific company case studies (both successes and failures)
• Include data on retention rates and promotion gaps
• Add toolkit for ERG leaders
• Include allyship action checklist
• Add section on measuring cultural transformation
• Include resources for reporting discrimination

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Diverse tech team collaborating in modern office, multiple professionals of different backgrounds working together, natural interaction, inclusive workspace, professional environment, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "staged, posed, stock photo look, text, logos, cartoon, low quality, forced diversity"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 32
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

15. Async Leadership {#15-async-leadership}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Well-structured with clear examples

Content Improvements

1. Timely Topic: Highly relevant for remote work era
2. Comprehensive Coverage: Addresses multiple aspects of async leadership
3. Practical Tools: Specific tool recommendations included

Suggestions

• Add timezone overlap calculator or tool recommendation
• Include async meeting templates
• Add decision-making flowchart for async teams
• Include case studies of successful async teams
• Add troubleshooting guide for common async challenges
• Include metrics for measuring async effectiveness

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Global team collaboration visualization, world map with connecting lines, digital network concept, modern technology aesthetic, professional business visualization, photorealistic digital art"

Negative Prompt: "people, faces, cartoon style, cluttered, text labels, low quality, busy"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

16. Engineering Marriage {#16-engineering-marriage}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Beautiful personal narrative with technical metaphors

Content Improvements

1. Personal Touch: Genuine and heartfelt
2. Creative Metaphors: Engineering concepts applied thoughtfully
3. Practical Wisdom: Real insights from long-term relationship

Suggestions

• Add specific examples of “debugging” relationship issues
• Include discussion prompts for couples
• Add section on handling “merge conflicts”
• Include “relationship sprint planning” template
• Add resources for relationship counseling when needed
• Include success metrics for relationship health

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Elegant wedding anniversary celebration setup, silver theme, 25th anniversary decorations, romantic atmosphere, beautiful table setting, warm lighting, sophisticated celebration, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "people, faces, text on decorations, cartoon, tacky, over-decorated, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 32
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

17. Conference Speaker {#17-conference-speaker}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Well-organized progression

Content Improvements

1. Clear Progression: Journey from local to international well-mapped
2. Comprehensive: Covers technical and business aspects
3. Realistic: Acknowledges challenges along the way

Suggestions

• Add sample talk abstracts at different experience levels
• Include speaker kit template
• Add contract negotiation tips and templates
• Include pre-talk checklist
• Add post-talk follow-up guide
• Include speaker burnout prevention strategies

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Professional speaker on tech conference stage, large audience screens visible, dramatic stage lighting, modern conference venue, keynote presentation setup, photorealistic detail, no people visible on stage"

Negative Prompt: "speaker visible, audience visible, text on screens, logos, cartoon, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

18. Career Inflection {#18-career-inflection}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Clear and well-structured

Content Improvements

1. Important Framework: Five inflection points well-defined
2. Universal Applicability: Relevant to most tech professionals
3. Decision Support: Provides guidance for navigation

Suggestions

• Add self-assessment quiz for identifying current inflection point
• Include decision matrix template
• Add case studies for each inflection point
• Include mentor matching suggestions for each transition
• Add financial planning considerations for each shift
• Include timeline expectations for each transition

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Career crossroads visualization, multiple paths diverging, professional journey concept, abstract but realistic, business decision metaphor, clean design, photorealistic rendering"

Negative Prompt: "people, text, arrows, labels, cartoon, cluttered, low quality, obvious symbolism"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

19. Side Hustle {#19-side-hustle}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Comprehensive and well-organized

Content Improvements

1. Practical Framework: Microservices metaphor works well
2. Risk Management: Addresses potential pitfalls
3. Comprehensive: Covers legal, financial, and operational aspects

Suggestions

• Add specific income projections for common side hustles
• Include tax planning section with CPA consultation recommendations
• Add time-tracking templates
• Include non-compete clause analysis guidance
• Add client onboarding templates
• Include exit strategy planning

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Multiple income streams visualization, distributed revenue concept, modern financial planning illustration, professional business graphic, clean design, photorealistic business visualization"

Negative Prompt: "people, text, charts with labels, cartoon, cluttered, low quality, money symbols"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

20. Mentoring Patterns {#20-mentoring-patterns}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Clever use of design pattern terminology

Content Improvements

1. Creative Framework: Design patterns metaphor is excellent
2. Comprehensive Coverage: Multiple pattern types addressed
3. Practical Application: Clear implementation guidance

Suggestions

• Add mentoring agreement templates
• Include matching algorithm considerations
• Add success story examples for each pattern
• Include metrics dashboard for program coordinators
• Add virtual mentoring best practices
• Include reverse mentoring section

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Mentorship patterns visualization, interconnected nodes, professional relationship network, abstract but meaningful, clean design, photorealistic rendering, business concept art"

Negative Prompt: "people, faces, text, labels, cartoon, cluttered, low quality, obvious arrows"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

21. Leadership Debt {#21-leadership-debt}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No spelling or grammar errors found
• Strong technical metaphor throughout

Content Improvements

1. Powerful Metaphor: Technical debt comparison is effective
2. Comprehensive Framework: Multiple debt types identified
3. Actionable Solutions: Clear remediation strategies

Suggestions

• Add leadership debt calculator tool
• Include organizational health assessment
• Add case studies of debt paydown success
• Include early warning sign checklist
• Add crisis management protocols
• Include board-level reporting templates

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Leadership debt visualization, organizational stress concept, abstract business pressure illustration, professional visualization, clean modern design, photorealistic rendering"

Negative Prompt: "people, text, obvious debt symbols, cartoon, cluttered, low quality, cliché imagery"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

22. Code Newbie {#22-code-newbie}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 13: Missing space in “width=400” attribute (should have spaces: width=”400”)
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Good Structure: Clear pre-mission format
2. Thorough Analysis: Detailed evaluation of each blog post
3. Personal Touch: Shows genuine engagement with the challenge

Suggestions

• Update any broken links (verify all URLs)
• Add reflection on how the exercise influenced later writing
• Include examples of posts written after completing this challenge
• Add metrics on blogging consistency improvement
• Include lessons learned section
• Add updated perspective now that time has passed

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Code newbie learning setup, laptop with code editor, coffee cup, notebook with handwritten notes, learning environment, warm lighting, productive atmosphere, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "code visible on screen, text readable, people, faces, cartoon, cluttered, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

23. Lightweight Budgeting (Old) {#23-lightweight-budgeting-old}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 48: “It doesn’t include streaming restaurants” → should likely be “streaming services or restaurants”
• Line 99: “ore specific” → “more specific”

Content Improvements

1. Incomplete Sections: Multiple areas lack conclusion or full explanation
2. Redundant Content: Some concepts repeated from newer version
3. Disorganized: Flow is choppy with incomplete thoughts

Suggestions

• This appears to be an earlier draft of the 2025-07-14 version
• Consider consolidating both versions into one comprehensive post
• Complete all partial sections
• Add specific examples for each account type
• Include visual aids or diagrams
• Add FAQ section for common questions

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Budget planning calculator and organized financial documents on desk, simple minimalist setup, natural lighting, clean organized workspace, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "text visible, numbers readable, messy, people, hands, cartoon, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

24. Stuttering {#24-stuttering}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 13: “dysfluency” is correct but consider “speech dysfluency” for clarity
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Personal and Powerful: Vulnerable and inspiring narrative
2. Concrete Strategies: Shares specific coping mechanisms
3. Encouraging: Provides hope to others with similar challenges

Suggestions

• Add resources for people who stutter
• Include specific breath work exercises mentioned
• Add section on supporting colleagues who stutter
• Include statistics about stuttering prevalence
• Add discussion of accommodations in the workplace
• Include links to stuttering support organizations

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Professional speaker on conference stage, empty stage with podium and microphone, dramatic stage lighting, large venue, inspiring presentation setup, photorealistic detail, no person visible"

Negative Prompt: "speaker visible, audience, text, logos, cartoon, low quality, cluttered"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

25. Retrospective 2019 {#25-retrospective-2019}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• No errors found in existing content

Content Improvements

1. Incomplete: All monthly sections marked “TBD”
2. Missing Content: Lessons learned section is empty
3. Framework Present: Good structure waiting to be filled

Suggestions

• Complete all monthly retrospective sections
• Add specific talks delivered each month
• Include lessons learned with concrete examples
• Add metrics (talks delivered, attendees reached, feedback received)
• Include travel map or visualization
• Add photo gallery of speaking events
• Complete the wishes for 2020 section
• Add actual outcomes vs. wishes as an update

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Year in review calendar layout, 2019 retrospective visualization, professional planning aesthetic, organized timeline, clean design, photorealistic rendering"

Negative Prompt: "text readable, specific dates visible, people, cartoon, cluttered, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 28
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.8 strength)

26. Smart Home Intro {#26-smart-home-intro}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 16: “use standards like wifi and bluetooth” → “use standards like Wi-Fi and Bluetooth” (proper capitalization)
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Incomplete Series: Only table of contents provided
2. Missing Content: No substantial introduction to smart home concepts
3. Limited Scope: Only three items in table of contents

Suggestions

• Add comprehensive introduction to smart home technology
• Expand table of contents (smart thermostats, smart speakers, smart plugs, etc.)
• Include overview of communication protocols (Zigbee, Z-Wave, Thread, Matter)
• Add compatibility considerations section
• Include privacy and security discussion
• Add cost breakdown by category
• Include hub vs hubless systems comparison
• Add beginner’s shopping list

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Modern smart home interior, sleek connected devices visible throughout, minimalist design, natural lighting, futuristic home technology, clean aesthetic, photorealistic architectural photography"

Negative Prompt: "people, text, product labels, cluttered, messy, cartoon, low quality, obvious tech"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.5
- Steps: 30
- Sampler: DPM++ 2M Karras
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.85 strength)

27. Test Draft {#27-test-draft}

Spelling/Grammar Issues

• Line 13: “jekyll serve” and “jekyll build” should be in code formatting for consistency
• No other errors found

Content Improvements

1. Purpose-Built: Clearly a test file
2. Functional: Serves its purpose as a draft test

Suggestions

• This is intentionally minimal as a test
• Consider removing if no longer needed for testing
• If keeping, add more Jekyll draft feature documentation
• Include examples of draft-specific front matter
• Add instructions for preview workflows

Stable Diffusion Parameters (Qwen Image Model)

Prompt: "Software testing environment, clean workspace with laptop showing code editor, minimal setup, developer tools, modern tech workspace, photorealistic detail"

Negative Prompt: "code visible on screen, text readable, people, cartoon, cluttered, low quality"

Settings:
- CFG Scale: 7.0
- Steps: 25
- Sampler: Euler a
- Size: 1024x768
- Refiner: Enabled (0.75 strength)

Summary Statistics

• Total Drafts Reviewed: 27
• Drafts with Spelling/Grammar Issues: 5
• Drafts Needing Major Content Completion: 7
• Drafts Ready for Publication (with minor edits): 15
• Average Content Quality: High - most posts are well-written with strong technical metaphors

Overall Recommendations

1. Complete Incomplete Posts: Prioritize finishing posts with “TBD” sections
2. Verify Links: Check all external URLs for validity
3. Add Visuals: Consider creating custom graphics beyond header images
4. Consolidate Duplicates: Merge the two lightweight budgeting posts
5. Update Dates: Some 2025 dates may need adjustment based on publication plans
6. Add CTAs: Consider adding calls-to-action at the end of posts (newsletter signup, related posts, etc.)
7. SEO Optimization: Add meta descriptions and keywords where missing
8. Cross-Link: Add internal links between related posts
9. Add Author Bio: Consider adding consistent author bio section
10. Social Sharing: Add social media sharing buttons

Next Steps

1. Review this summary document
2. Prioritize which posts to complete first
3. Make corrections to posts with errors
4. Generate header images using the provided Stable Diffusion parameters
5. Add suggested improvements based on priorities
6. Test Jekyll build with updated posts
7. Publish incrementally based on content calendar

This review was completed on the draft content as of the current date. Some suggestions may require additional research or resources to implement.